Tuesday, May 28, 2013

The Ballad of Lucy Whipple (By Karen Cushman)

The Ballad of Lucy Whipple is a story I read for school. It takes place from 1849-1852. I would give it 8 1/2 stars out of 10. (I think I may need to add more stars I can give!) This is how the back of the book summarizes it:




Dear Gram and Grampop,

Please do not address yours truly as California anymore, California Morning Whipple being a foolish name for a duck much less a girl. I call myself Lucy now. I cannot hate California and be California. I know you will understand.
 

 
California doesn't suit Lucy Whipple- not the name, not the place. So Lucy vows to be plain miserable until she can hightail it back to the East where she belongs. But Lucy California Morning Whipple may be in for a surprise- because home is a lot closer than she thinks.

This is how I'd describe it:

California Whipple is moving to California with her family- and is not happy about it. She decides to change her name to Lucy. She is determined to get back to the East, with or without her family.

I would recommend this book to a friend.

Enjoy reading it!

The Ballad of Lucy Whipple (1996)- By Karen Cushman

http://www.amazon.com/Ballad-Lucy-Whipple-Karen-Cushman/dp/B004QPZQ54/ref=sr_1_5?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1369763636&sr=1-5&keywords=the+ballad+of+lucy+whipple

Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Shimmer: Prologue


PROLOGUE:

 

“I can raise the sun!” Celestia lifted a yellow marble with her magic.

“I can raise the moon!” Luna lifted a navy blue marble with her magic.

“Uh! Uh!” Shimmer tried to pick up her marble and failed.

“The sun will beat the moon!” Celestia cried, bringing her marble closer to Luna’s.

“Nuh-uh! The moon will beat the sun!” Luna said defensively, clinking her marble against Tia’s.

Shimmer looked down at her plain marble sadly.

“Come on moon!” Trickles of sweat went down Luna’s forehead.

“Go sun!” Celestia was sweating, too.

Shimmer got an idea. She scooped her marble up with her hooves, and cried, “You’re both wrong. My marble and I will beat both of you!”

Celestia dropped her marble. “Shim-mer!” she complained. “I was beating Luna! Why did you have to interrupt us?”

“Nuh-uh! The moon was beating the sun!” Luna said.

Shimmer watched sadly as her sisters continued to play without her. Like always.

“Tia! Lu Lu! Shimmer! Lunch!” the sisters' mother called. Tia and Lu Lu bustled past Shimmer, leaving her on her back, outside, alone.

Shimmer got up and slowly walked inside. Celestia and Luna ran into her.

“Shim-mer!” Luna said. “Get out of our way! Why are you always so mean to us?”

“Yeah,” Celestia exclaimed. “You’re always in our way.”

Shimmer watched, heartbroken, as her sisters ran out to play without her.





“Blank flank! Blank flank! Shimmer has a blank flank!”

Shimmer covered her ears and closed her eyes.

“Blank flank! Blank flank! Shimmer has a blank flank!” The taunting continued.

Every year Shimmer dreaded school. And every year it came. She was already in 5th grade- why was she still a blank flank?

“Blank flank!”

The worst part was even Tia and Lu Lu were laughing along. Not a big surprise, but still…

“Shimmer has a blank flank!”

“Enough!” Mrs. Flower Power cried, although even she looked amused. “We were all a blank flank once.”

Everypony stopped laughing. They knew better than to mess with Mrs. Power.

“Everypony take out your journals and flip to the next blank page. Try to find as many good things about yourself as you can and write them down.”

Everypony listened. At the end of class when Mrs. Power went around to see what everypony wrote, Shimmer had nothing.

“Shimmer! Why don’t you have anything?” Mrs. Power asked.

“There’s nothing good about me,” Shimmer replied.

“Yes there is,” Mrs. Power told her.

“Like what?” Shimmer asked.

“Umm, well…”

“See? Nothing! I'm not a good pony at all!”

So when the class did a poster saying good things about themselves, there was nothing about Shimmer.

Shimmer cried all the way home.

 
 




“Welcome home girls!” the sisters’ mother said excitedly. “You have a sister!”
 
Shimmer froze. A new sister?

“A sister! How exciting!” Celestia and Luna exclaimed together. They gave each other a hug and ran to see the baby. Slowly and carefully, Shimmer followed.
 
The baby laughed as Shimmer drew closer. All of a sudden, Shimmer sneezed. And sneezed again. And again. And again. 

“Oh dear,” Candy Cane, the girls’ mother said softly. She called a doctor.

“Hmm…” the doctor said, looking Shimmer over carefully. “It seems she is severely allergic to the baby’s horseshoes.”

Candy gasped. Everypony knew that baby fillies had to wear the horseshoes to keep their hooves straight.

Shimmer fled outside, crying. Celestia and Luna ran after her, but Shimmer was out of sight. For hundreds of years to come, the family would be apart.

Shimmer: An Introduction

Shimmer is a My Little Pony story I'm writing. It's sad. Here is the description:

Shimmer is an Alicorn who has nothing. She can't fly or do magic, and she's terrible with plants. Her sisters dislike her, as does everypony else, including herself. She has zero confidence.
2002 years ago, Shimmer left her family and hasn't seen them since. Now, in the paper, she sees Twilight Sparkle became a princess, and wants to get her advice.
The carriage company says no to anypony but Alicorns, and says she needs a badge to ride. She now has to walk to Ponyville.
What will happen on her journey? Will she gain confidence in herself? Maybe make some friends?
 
I hope you enjoy reading it!

Friday, April 26, 2013

Short Story: The Widow Carey's Chickens from the Book Best Shorts (By Gerald Hausman)

This is a review of the short story The Widow Carey's Chickens that I read for school.

The characters are:

Widow Carey.
Georgie (Susan's mother)
Susan
Keziah Coffin
Georgie (Susan's daughter)


My summary is:

The James Moffett was a ship that sank. Widow Carey was the only survivor. Georgie (the 1st one) tries to convince the widow to go back home. Years later, a Keziah Coffin, a journalist comes and Susan tells him about Widow Carey. Georgie (her daughter) tells him about the petrels, which everyone believes are chickens because they are tame. Georgie says she will take him to see the "chickens and...

You'll have to read it to find out!

The story is in Best Shorts on pages 265 - 279.

I recommend this short!



By the way, I know I gave you the hint before on my explanation, but this comes before that review. Sorry!

The Widow Carey's Chickens (2003)- Gerald Hausman

Best Shorts (2006)- By Avi

Thursday, April 25, 2013

An Explanation

I am sorry I have not been posting. I meant to have story starters every other month, but I will not be doing any for April.


Also, I am getting ready to start posting the 1st of a series of reviews. I'll give you 1 hint:

The books I'm reviewing are older books.


Now, here's why I haven't been posting:

1. My birthday.
2. My older dog, Kimba died.
3. My younger dog bit me, and he will have surgery so he cannot have puppies.
4. My Mommy had surgery yesterday.
5. My Mom Mom and Uncle Dave both had surgery on Wednesday.

So I will start my story starters up again in May, and I will do a book review as soon as possible.

Also, I need to figure some things out will the polls, and then I will take them down and add new ones.

Finally, I will start up something new for my blog. I won't say what, yet.

The next month will be full of surprises! :)

Tuesday, March 19, 2013

Johnny Tremain (By Esther Hoskins Forbes)

This is a review of Johnny Tremain, a book I read for school. It takes place in the late 1700's. I would give it 8 stars. I would recommend it for kids ages 10-13. This is my summary:

Johnny Tremain is a silversmith's apprentice, along with 2 other boys, Dove and Dusty. He bullies the other boys, but is still favored among them. It's because he is the best at the work. One day, Dusty plays a trick on him when he is making a cup. It ruins his right hand. Because of this, he cannot silversmith. Johnny has to find a new job. He works for a newspaper, where he makes new friends, and he ends up in historical events, including the Boston Tea Party.

I would recommend this book to a friend.

Johnny Tremain (1943)- By Esther Hoskins Forbes

Picture from Amazon.com
http://www.amazon.com/Johnny-Tremain-Esther-Hoskins-Forbes/dp/0547614322/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1363725225&sr=8-1&keywords=johnny+tremain#_

Friday, March 1, 2013

Poll- What's Your Favorite Book of the Ones Below?

These are the poll results:

The City of Ember: 25%- 1 vote
The People of Sparks: 25%- 1 vote
The Prophet of Yonwood: 0%- 0 votes
Diary of a Wimpy Kid: 50%- 2 votes

It looks like Diary of a Wimpy Kid won! Again, for the next poll: Help me decide in the comments! I will have 1 more poll I've decided- a viewers choice and a poll that's my choice! From now on, polls last a week.